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Sunday, January 10, 2010

nel version 2

okay sorry me again, i did another version of the character nel from
bleach, i wasnt really happy with the previous version
but now that ive done this version i find that their is something
still wrong with the face i cant figure out what it is and its
driving me nuts, i think maybe the lips perhaps


Luca said...

better man! What's off with the face is the center line. If you have to drop a line from the middle of the nose to the middle of the chin, the mouth wouldn't be centered. I suggest you to make a new layer and make the construction lines on it and adjust the lips underneath that layer, so your perspective won't get off.

Good luck.

me9a7 said...

Hi Gibbo! i think you got it right in the first version. the first one was more simplistic as you used lines to define the lips as how manga styles are, and its very suggestive. so sometimes when we add details to our renderings it becomes more prominent in view. with the second version you have a full lips rendered which defines it more so the face alignment becomes more obvious to the eyes. (ooh me likes the way you rendered the nose :)*nods sorry if i dont make sense here :p

so that or what Luca said lolz!


Graham Knowles said...

The only thing I can see is that maybe the right eye, the one slightly hidden byt he hair is too low. Other than that I think you did an amazing job on the hair. Very realistic.

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